My DLO

My drawing from home

This is my drawing from home I love it, I even think its the best drawing I've ever done. I learned how to do it by watching a video that I will link right now hope you learn how to do it and comment if you did it.

My ice cream writing

today we had ice cream the flavour was goody-goody gumdrop here is my draft

Draft:  

As Mr Mitchell opened the goody gumdrop ice cream my mouth was filled up with sliver. The ice cream
tasted like a bubblegum flavour with some flavoured gumdrops
everyone had some but it was only the people in my class. The ice cream smelled like bubble
gum but you could not really tell.

here is what my buddy said

I like how describe about Mr Mitchell opened the goody gum drop and I like what you said about  you liked the ice cream off of your hand and great job, keep up your good work

this is my final

Final

As Mr Mitchell opened the goody gumdrop ice cream my mouth was filled up with sliver.

The ice cream tasted like a bubblegum flavour with some flavoured gumdrops everyone had some but
it was only the people in my class. The ice cream smelled like bubblegum but you could not really tell.
When I touched the ice cream it was cold so I licked it off my hand.

Summer learning journey- arriving in New Zealand

Activity 1

It is widely believed that the first people to arrive in New Zealand came from Polynesia. Most historians believe that they landed in New Zealand over 700 years ago. Although they were originally from many different countries, these settlers learned to live together and, eventually, formed their own distinct culture known as ‘Māori.’  Māori have their own language, traditions, and culture.

Follow this link to read a short story about a famous man in Māori mythology – Maui. On your blog, post three facts that you learned about this interesting man. What other stories have you heard about Maui?

Fact 1. His brothers would not let him go fishing.

Fact 2. His brothers were always angry at him.

Fact 3. He court a big fish.

Fact 4. he was the best fisherman ever

Making a reindeer

today we had to make this reindeer and you had to cut up all the pieces and put them together it was so fun we had to take a snapshot to make proof and here is mine.

Christmas around the world

We are learning about Christmas traditions around the world.
today we have been learning about others country's that do Christmas in a different way and what they do at Christmas

In France the kids put there socks in front of the fire place and the next day they put them on they like it and find there shoes filled up with gifts.

and they like it that way because its there country and that's what they do.




can you please give me some feedback that would be amazing thank you.

Don't let the pigeon stay up late

 Walt: we are learning to write an opinion.

 For the last few weeks we have been reading these stories called -

Don't let the pigeon drive the bus.

Don't let the pigeon stay up late.

The pigeon needs a bath.

The pigeon wants a walrus.

We did an opinion plan we had to put detail into the plan

after we just writ the opinion story.

Please give me some feedback that would be great.

Don’t let the pigeon stay up late

I think the pigeon should not stay up late!

I don’t think it’s a good idea because the pigeon might be grumpy and angry because he did not get his 10 hours sleep.

I don’t think the pigeon should stay up late because the pigeon might have a busy day tomorrow like running swimming or a flying race the next day.

I don’t think he should go to bed because if he sleeps he might get a treat tomorrow in the morning and it might be yummy.