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Camp!!!

You would never believe what I did I went to CAMP! here is me I was doing archery it was so fun 

Make Their Day Shop

I Lily and Libby and Lily W made a make their day shop Libby did the rules and I did the sign witch was Make Their Day Shop and Lily W did Ideas for people. It Took us a couple of days with putting the decorations on I had to cut the green paper behind the words so it would fit. Mrs Mcguinniety put the paper with the boxes on so people can sign it so they can get a ice block but you have to make a promise before you get the ice block. You have to make a photo of what you did and you had to post it on your blog so we know that you did it this was so fun the flavors where Raspberry, lime, lemonade the classes room 8, 7, 6 got some Ice blocks they had to write their name.
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