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Thursday 19 October 2017

My Te Manu Tukutuku poem

Te Manu Tukutuku Poem

I felt amazing when I walked into the new school.
I heard people chatting to each other and screaming.
I saw kids having fun on the playgrounds and on the basketball court.
I got to touch the soft, bouncy, comfy, warm furniture that was new.

I smelt the nice fresh air in the new school.

Here is my poem. The most challenging thing for me was to figure out what to write for my poem that was really challenging. But I still like writing my poem it was super fun. The most fun thing about it was writing the poem.

Can you please give me some feedback if you could thanks.