Draft:
As Mr Mitchell opened the goody gumdrop ice cream my mouth was filled up with sliver. The ice cream
tasted like a bubblegum flavour with some flavoured gumdrops
everyone had some but it was only the people in my class. The ice cream smelled like bubble
gum but you could not really tell.
tasted like a bubblegum flavour with some flavoured gumdrops
everyone had some but it was only the people in my class. The ice cream smelled like bubble
gum but you could not really tell.
here is what my buddy said
I like how describe about Mr Mitchell opened the goody gum drop and I like what you said about you liked the ice cream off of your hand and great job, keep up your good work
this is my final
Final
As Mr Mitchell opened the goody gumdrop ice cream my mouth was filled up with sliver.
The ice cream tasted like a bubblegum flavour with some flavoured gumdrops everyone had some but
it was only the people in my class. The ice cream smelled like bubblegum but you could not really tell.
When I touched the ice cream it was cold so I licked it off my hand.
it was only the people in my class. The ice cream smelled like bubblegum but you could not really tell.
When I touched the ice cream it was cold so I licked it off my hand.
