I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This is my drawing from home I love it, I even think its the best drawing I've ever done. I learned how to do it by watching a video that I will link right now hope you learn how to do it and comment if you did it.
Well done Lily, this looks really good! I particularly like the way you have drawn the eye. Next time you should colour your dolphin in, like the one on the video.
Amazing job lily, that really is a piece of art. I love the fact that you put the video from were you learnt how to make you amazing masterpiece. Maybe next time you could put a video of you making your art. Good luck and great job!
Hi Lily, I really like your drawing because I like dolphins and they are really cool. I like how you have drawn the crown so that the dolphin is royalty. I think next time you should add colour and make the dolphin a bit longer.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Good work lily. Yours is better than the video.
ReplyDeleteWell done Lily, this looks really good! I particularly like the way you have drawn the eye. Next time you should colour your dolphin in, like the one on the video.
ReplyDeleteI agree, it looks amazing how you drawed it I cant even draw dolphins ur better then me at drawing things im bad at it
ReplyDeleteAmazing job lily, that really is a piece of art. I love the fact that you put the video from were you learnt how to make you amazing masterpiece. Maybe next time you could put a video of you making your art. Good luck and great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Lily, I really like your drawing because I like dolphins and they are really cool. I like how you have drawn the crown so that the dolphin is royalty. I think next time you should add colour and make the dolphin a bit longer.
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