I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
If I were asked to compete in a tandem cycling event for the Paralympics and I had to choose one person to compete with I would choose my Aunty Shanelle because she taught me how to ride a bike
Hi Lily, I Like how you said that if you were to compete in the Paralympics you would choose your auntie to help you. But maybe next time you can include what you are learning about and include full stops.
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Hi Lily, I Like how you said that if you were to compete in the Paralympics you would choose your auntie to help you. But maybe next time you can include what you are learning about and include full stops.
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