Don't let the pigeon stay up late

 Walt: we are learning to write an opinion.

 For the last few weeks we have been reading these stories called -

Don't let the pigeon drive the bus.

Don't let the pigeon stay up late.

The pigeon needs a bath.

The pigeon wants a walrus.

We did an opinion plan we had to put detail into the plan

after we just writ the opinion story.

Please give me some feedback that would be great.

Don’t let the pigeon stay up late

I think the pigeon should not stay up late!

I don’t think it’s a good idea because the pigeon might be grumpy and angry because he did not get his 10 hours sleep.

I don’t think the pigeon should stay up late because the pigeon might have a busy day tomorrow like running swimming or a flying race the next day.

I don’t think he should go to bed because if he sleeps he might get a treat tomorrow in the morning and it might be yummy.