We are doing a hurumanu that is art it's about two bullys the bullys are me and sapphire and three kind people are kahciar makenzie and jessica they are on a playground and the bullys come over and then they push off makenzie and then the two people stick up for there friends.
the feedback was we liked how you labeled the people so we can see whos, who
we liked the way you drew the props so we can see what they are.
the feedback was we liked how you labeled the people so we can see whos, who
we liked the way you drew the props so we can see what they are.
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