The gooey stuff sat disgustingly in the cup.
It smelt like glue,shampoo, conditioner and lotion, in the container.
It smelt like gross sunscreen,stuff like green sunscreen in the container.
Its smells like buttery, slimey stuff.
It felt slimy,buttery stuff going out of the container.
It sounded like popping bubbles,slippy,gooey in the slimey container.
It looked like green gross stuff.
It looked like dish washing liquid.
It looked like glue, lotion and oil.
It felt like slime dripping down my hands.
It felt like liquid disgusting.
Hi Lily, I really like your writing!!! I wasn't here when you were playing with snot. Next time you could maybe put a photo in your work!
ReplyDeleteOh hi kristie I was away to but next time I will
Deletekia Ora lily,
ReplyDeleteI think your writing was awesome. I like your describing words. I like how you included what you heard and saw.
Shukoor
YMS
Hi Lily! Telesia here! I am a year 6 student at St. Bernadette's Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI love that you used descriptive words to describe what the snot smelt like, felt like and looked like! Next time, maybe you could put an image of the snot you described.
Keep up the good work!
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DeleteThank you Telesia about the descriptive words. maybe next time I could put a Image I was away that day so... But thanks anyway what's your blog so I can cheek it out.
DeleteSincerely yours
Lily